Skip to main content

Dreamy Doll

The dreamy doll always,
walking in moon light,
her head prides upright.
Never talks to others,
none she bothers.
But, with passing hours,
her dazzling elegancy ,
turns into thinner delicacy.

When I awoke in morning,
on the floor tracing
the dusty sprinkles.
I fixed the
wooden doll's hollow.

Linked with:Poetry Jam-Dream.
P.S: Dream personified as Sherlock Holmes. :D


  1. The wonder and power of a dream, nicely captured.

  2. Ah your dreamy doll seemed to create her own world,

  3. I would love to find dusty sprinkles when I awake.

    1. Oh granted! If you are ready to cleanse it up. Kidding :D

  4. I hope you will honor others from poetry jam with a visit as the spirit of community...

    1. Ah... thanks for motive words, only commenting on very new site backs me from doing it... but sure i will not override the rule :D

  5. An interesting take on the prompt.

  6. Replies
    1. Thank you... and will check-in too :)

  7. I like that ending and the fact that the doll awakes with the moon. Nice.

  8. A beautiful take on the prompt. Nice...


Post a Comment

Share your thoughts! Make your wise words visible to the world. :P

Popular posts from this blog

The Moment

I like to be loved
You like to be loved
I don’t love you
You don’t love me
Yeah you don’t love me
I don’t love you
May be we do
may be we don’t
may be we will
may be very soon
may be very late…
Dunno when would love bloom..
may be on day wen sun find its way..
may be on night when owl howl..
May be when it is not expected…
May be when it is most needed…
Despite the impossible odds
and all the distance between us…
I still hold out a small hope that
someday somehow someway we find each other…
All I could say is
Staying in love.
Tat time
I see
you in me
I in you
Nothing around
Only we.
The end!!!!
Me and my friend Jeet composed a song, just when we are having a moment :P

He is... my cookie monster!

“Mom, I don’t want to go please...”
“Ah! I promise I will get you at evening”
“No buts, it’s getting late, bell is going ring…. Run!”

She expected me to run, but actually she was running towards the parking lot leaving me behind. I dodged the sands with my shoes guessing I could plant my legs inside it.  I watched her back; I did all assured signs with my hands and yelled ‘mom’ to make her look back. But she moved on, not even bothering what her only darling daughter was trying to demand. Meanwhile all my efforts was evident to my P.T master only, he gave me one daring look in return indicating not to open my mouth again.

School is not a pleasant place for 7 years old girl, especially when you have a bully tagging along with you.

Bell rang! I fasten my steps and went straight to IIB class but not without giving a glance at IIA section class. I always wished for that class, it’s not that am having any special friend in it or that class teacher is Motherly Angel. It’s all becau…